I went to Fukuoka to go shopping with my friend. He lives Fukuoka so that he picked up me. At first, we went to dazayfu and we bought omamori. There were a loto of people and we were very tired. After that we went to Tenjin to go shopping. There were also a lot of people but we enjoyed shopping very much!! We bought some clothes and we vere very satisfied. We went to pietro to eat dinner. I like pasta very much so that I was happy.
We talked a lot and laughed so much!! I enjoyed him very much. It was very nice day for me.
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2010年1月6日水曜日
Student ID: 08144
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | Essay2-01a FavPlace.doc | 2009.10.17 | 307 | 0 | ||||
| 2-01b (2009.10.21) | Essays2-01bFavPlace.doc | 2009.10.21 | 308 | 1 | ||||
| (2-01c) | ||||||||
| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | Draft essay post: 2-02a | 2009.10.28 | 367 | 3 | ||||
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | Revise essay 2-02b World history | 2009.11.11 | 391 | 1 | ||||
| (2-02c) | ||||||||
| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | Draft essays 2-03a | 2009.11.28 | 646 | 7 | ||||
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | Draft essays 2-03b | 2009.12.17 | 510 | 0 | ||||
| (2-03c) | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 2529 | 12 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Social Media and Social Networking Explained | 2009.10.14 | 21 | I watched "Social Media in Plain English". I thought it is very important to give own idea and accept other ideas. |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Esay 02-03a My English track | 2009.11.29 | 28 | I asked her what level English teacher she wants to be. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Draft essays 2-03a | 2009.11.28 | 19 | She asked me how to study English now. |
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | | 2009.11.28 | 646 | They asked me why I like England. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.12.06 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 91 | I wrote on my blog. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ... Yes it has a comment gadget.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
- ....
3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | 2009.10.07 | 200 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | 2009.10.29 | 73 | 0 | |
BR 2-03 | 2009.12.05 | 111 | 0 | |
BR 2-04 | 2009.12.17 | 104 | 0 | |
BR 2-05 | 200912.19 | 55 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs | 2010.01.14 | 76 | 0 |
BR 2-07 | ||||
BR 2-08 | ||||
BR 2-09 | ||||
BR 2-10 | ||||
BR 2-11 | ||||
BR 2-12 | ||||
BR 2-13 | ||||
BR 2-14 | ||||
BR 2-15 | ||||
BR 2-16 | ||||
BR 2-17 | ||||
BR 2-18 | ||||
--- | --- | Totals: | 619 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think the best book review is the Goose that Laid the Golden Eggs. Because this book included sad story and happy story. I could think a lot of things so that this book moved me.
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | √ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | √ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | √ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | √ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | √ | |
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| √ | |
| √ | |
| √ | |
| √ | |
| √ | |
| √ | |
| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | √ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | √ | |
| √ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | √ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | √ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ... I think that including photos is the best thing.
- ... Reading English books is enhancing our skills.
- ...
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- ... I became to type speeder.
- ... I read some English books.
- ...
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
- ... I have to read English books more.
- ... To include some photos.
- ...
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
License:
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Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
2010年1月1日金曜日
☆２０１０☆
Happy New Year!! How are you? I had a lot of experiences last year and worried about a lot of things. Do you have a plan what you want to do this year? I am going to abroad this year so that I decide to study English hard!!
It was very cold today!! I paid to a visit to a shrine with my family in the morning. When we came back home, we ate osechi and my father gave me a New Year's gift!! I like New Years Day because I can get a New Year's gift. I was very happy!! In my house, I watched TV, listening to music and so on. I idled away so much. In evening, we went to my sister's house. Her son had a faver so that her family could not come to my house. We talked a lot of things!! I was glad because her son's faver fell.
I will go to my grandmother's house tomorrow!! I am looking forward to meeting her very much!!
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☆December 31☆
I went to shopping with my friend, Ryousuke. We went to kurea and youme town in hikarinomori. He wanted to buy some clothes so that we went there. We looked a lot of clothes and we bought some clothes. I like pasta so that we ate pasta in lunch.
He's from Fukuaka so that he came back in night. We talked a lot of things and laughed a lot!! He is very funny and made me laugh. It was very interesting day for me!!
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He's from Fukuaka so that he came back in night. We talked a lot of things and laughed a lot!! He is very funny and made me laugh. It was very interesting day for me!!
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2009年12月30日水曜日
☆December 30☆
I had pounded steamed rice cake glutinous today. I don't like rice cake too much but I like to pound it!! Because could do it with talking!!
After finishing it, I went to downtown to eat dinner with myfriends, Nami and Hikaru. They are very good friends for me. We went to Parco to look some clothes. I wanted to buy some clothed but I didn't have enough money so that I didn't buy them. After that we took a print club pictures and went to izakaya. We ate dinner in meijiishin. Do you know there? There is near kourantei. The mood of there was very goos and clerks were very frinedly!! We like there very much!!
We go to different university so that we can't meet a lot of times. So I was very happy to meet them. We talked a lot!! I like Nami and Hikaru so much!! I had a very good time with them today!!
(159words)
December 28
I stayed my friend's house after finishing my part-time job. He goes to Kumamoto University and he and I work at same part-time job. He is very friendly and funny.
We went to buy something to drink and went to his house. We talked a lot of things and laughed a lot!! We woke up until 5 a.m. We had a part-time job so that we slept!! But we had slept for only 3 hours so that we were very tired.
But I could enjoy talking with him very much!!
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We went to buy something to drink and went to his house. We talked a lot of things and laughed a lot!! We woke up until 5 a.m. We had a part-time job so that we slept!! But we had slept for only 3 hours so that we were very tired.
But I could enjoy talking with him very much!!
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December 26
I went to ラズッカ with my friend, Tsubasa. Haruka works there so that we went to eat dinner with him. We ate pasta and pizza. They were very delicious and the mood of the restaurant was very good!! There are very nice place for couple, I think. I want to go there again!!
Haruka came to my house after finishing her part-time job. I was very happy!! Tsubasa, Haruka and I went to Mcdonald and talked a lot. We enjoyed very much. After that Haruka and I went my house. We talked a lot of things and slept so much!!
It was a very nice day for me!!
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