☆December 30☆

I had pounded steamed rice cake glutinous today. I don't like rice cake too much but I like to pound it!! Because could do it with talking!!

After finishing it, I went to downtown to eat dinner with myfriends, Nami and Hikaru. They are very good friends for me. We went to Parco to look some clothes. I wanted to buy some clothed but I didn't have enough money so that I didn't buy them. After that we took a print club pictures and went to izakaya. We ate dinner in meijiishin. Do you know there? There is near kourantei. The mood of there was very goos and clerks were very frinedly!! We like there very much!!

We go to different university so that we can't meet a lot of times. So I was very happy to meet them. We talked a lot!! I like Nami and Hikaru so much!! I had a very good time with them today!!

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December 28

I stayed my friend's house after finishing my part-time job. He goes to Kumamoto University and he and I work at same part-time job. He is very friendly and funny.
We went to buy something to drink and went to his house. We talked a lot of things and laughed a lot!! We woke up until 5 a.m. We had a part-time job so that we slept!! But we had slept for only 3 hours so that we were very tired.
But I could enjoy talking with him very much!!
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December 26

I went to ラズッカ with my friend, Tsubasa. Haruka works there so that we went to eat dinner with him. We ate pasta and pizza. They were very delicious and the mood of the restaurant was very good!! There are very nice place for couple, I think. I want to go there again!!

Haruka came to my house after finishing her part-time job. I was very happy!! Tsubasa, Haruka and I went to Mcdonald and talked a lot. We enjoyed very much. After that Haruka and I went my house. We talked a lot of things and slept so much!!

It was a very nice day for me!!

(111words)

Christmas Cake !!

I intended to have a Cristmas Party in Spanish class but there was not a party. So I was very sad but we ate a cake in class.

Before starting Spanish class, I bought a cake with Haruka!! We went to a cake store, shiawasesagashi. We like the store very much. There are very delicious cake!!

We could enjoy eating and talking!!

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Special Day !!

It was a very special day for me!! I went to live with my friend, Haruka. Syota Shimizu and Miriyah Kato came to Kumamoto last Sunday. We were looking forward to going live very much.

First, we went to eat lunch but the restaurant where we wanted to go were full of guests. So we went to another restaurant. We ate pasta, pizza and so on. They were very delicious so that we were very satisfied. Next, we went to granmesse. There were a lot of people so that it was very trouble to park my car. There were six groups; Shun, Safarii, Hi-Pri, RSP, Syota Shimizu and Miriyah Kato. Especialy I like Shota Kato!!

Do you know Shun? He is 17 years old and he is a very good rupper. Not only his rup but also his songs are very good!! I also became to like Safarii. Their songs moved me so much!! But... I like Shota Shimizu!! He is a very good singer and he is very cute!! I was very impressed. Shota and Miriyah sang 'Love Forever' . We were very excited!!

Haruka stayed at my house. In my house we talked a lot and laughed!! We enjoyed very much. It was very wonderful day for us!!

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BR 2-05: Stories of fairies

This story is about fairies and a girl. One day a girl went to a village and a lot of faries live there. There were not only good faries but also bad faries.

I think that it is very bad thing to deceive friends. This story tells me how important to hold our friends dear.

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Devember 18

This is a cheese cake which is sold in Lowson. Tsubasa bought for Haruka and me!! I like cheese cake very much so that I was very happy. Tsu basa, Haruka and I ate lunch in 14 building together. My friend, Ryousuke came to Kumamoto Gakuen University. After school, Haruka, Ryousuke and I went shopping. When I drove a car, it snowed a little!! We were suprised!! We talked a lot and laughed!!

We had a part-time job so that we went back. It was a very interesting day for me!!

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My Car ♪♪

I went shopping with Haruka after achool.　I want to buy some cushions for my car.　I like red the best so that I want to buy red cushions.　We went to "Donki" and bought some cushions. We like them very much because they are very cute!! My car became very cute, I think.

After shopping, we went to Joufull. It was very cold day so that we wanted to something hot to drink. We drank some coffe and eat cake!! We like sweets very much!! I like cheese cake the best. We were satisfied with the cake and enjoyed very much!!

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☆COFFEE☆

I went to some places with my friend, Haruka. First, I went to star bucks to drink coffee. We like there very much!! There are a lot of delicious coffee shops, I think. We talked about a lot of things and thought a lot. After that, we went to KumamotoUniversity to meet our friend, Ryousuke. He　is very funny and friendly so that we like him very much. We ate lunch in Kumamoto University. There is a caffee named Forico. It is very cute caffe and very clean!! We laughed a lot!! Next, we went to youme town because we had a lot of times. No sooner arrived there than we ran to a bathroom! After that we went to TULLY'S COFFE. Haruka and I went to caffe twice a day!!
We laughed a lot so that we were tired. We had a part-time job so that we get back. I had a very good time with Haruka and Ryousuke!!
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BR 2-04: The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs

I read "the Goose that laid the Golden Eggs". This story is abput a couple. Tom and Elena were very poor. But one day, he found a gplden ugg and he sold it to a found a gplden ugg and he sold it to a village. They became rich but they think about theirselevs. Thanks for the goose, they were very happy but they killed the goose. After that they became very poor again.
I think that this story teels us how important out life and it is very bad thing to think about myself. I want to be a kind person to everyone.
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Draft essays 2-03b

I introduce why I study English. When I went to miyuki elementary school, I would often watch western movie because my mother and my elder sister like it very much. And now, I like it so much.
When I went to junior high school, I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study. Not only studying English but also listening to western music. I like Britney and Ne-yo the best.
When I went to high school, Kyusyu Gakuin, I liked English so that my major had been English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. I studied English very hard but it is not hardship for me because I like English very much.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. My friends are very wonderful person so that I like this university!! I decided to study English very hard when I entered university. I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now. A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I practiced the piano I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me to play both piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day. I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think that “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go, but I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me. I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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He is...

His name is Kakeru and he is my nephew. He is very cute!!! My elder sister got married last year and gave birth to a boy. Kakeru is one year old. He could walk recently and say something. My sister looks busy for child raising. But she looks very happy because her married life is very wonderful!! Her husband is very kind and friendly. I think that I want to take a happy married life when I get marry!!

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Year-end Party!!

I had year-end party in my part-time job. I like drinking very much so that I was looking forward to taking it. First we went to izakaya and drank a lot. In my part-time job, there are almost student of Kumamoto University. I could listen about other university. It was very interesting for me and I thought that I have to study more.
We went to izakaya at post-party party. I like to drink wine the best so that I wanted to drink wine but there were no wine!! So I drank ume liqueur. I like it too. I wanted to talk with them but I had to go back home so that I got back home. I talked about a lot of things and laughed a lot!! It was very interesting day for me.
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☆Kumamoto University☆

December 10, I went to Kumamoto University with my friends, Haruka and Tsubasa. Tsubasa and I had to apply international student identification card for our studying abroad but I forgot my picture so that I couln't do it.
I had friends in Kumamoto University. One of them came to see us. His name is Ryousuke. He is very friendly and funny!! We ate lunch together and talked about 2 hours. He had a class so he came back his class.
Next, we went to star bucks. I like star bucks very much!! We talked about a lot of things. It was very nice day for me!!
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This is .....

My sister made this for me!! She is very clever with her fingers. I want to go nail but I had enough money to go there so that she made it for Coming of Age Day.

I like it very much!! But she will make it another desighn. I am look forward to completing them so much!!

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BR 2-03: Pinocchio

I read this book, Pinocchio. I have watched this movie a few times but I had never read the book. This story is about a boy named Pinocchio made of wood. The wise cricket said, "Only good sons have a chance of becoming real boys". Although he had a lot of trouble, he could become a real boy.

I think that it is a very bad thing to tell a lie. Because a person who was told a lie felt very sad. I think it is nesecarry to tell a good lie but it doesn't need to tell a bad lie.

This story is very cute and moved me so much.

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♪Karaoke♪

I had a institute for my part-time job. We had it twice a year. First, I picked up my senior at his house and we went together. The institute was about 2 hours and we were a little tired. After that, we went to ground of Kenritsu University because my senior had a baseball game there. So I took him there.
Next I went to karaoke with Tsubasa. We sang about 3 hours because he had a part-time job. We sang a lot of sad songs!! Resently I like "ただ一つの願いさえ" which is sung by Love. Do you know this song? It is very nice and sad song!! I like it very much. Please listen it!! Tsubasa sings very well, I think. We sang and talked a lot of things. I had a very good time with him.
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☆TULLY'S COFFEE☆

I went to youme town in hikarinomori with my friends, Haruka and Tsubasa. We ate lunch 14 building and went there. I wanted to buy red coat so that they went shopping with me. We looked for a lot of shops and I bought it!! I like it very much!!

After that we went to Tully's Coffee and I drank tilamisu latte. It was very delicious and liked it so much!! Please drink it!! You will like it!!

Thanks to Haruka and Tsubasa, I was able to buy red coat. Thank you Haruka and Tsubasa!! I had very good time with them!!

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With Haruka!!

I went shopping with my friend, Haruka. We finished school in the morning so that we went to Curea. First, we were very hungry so that we went to ninnikuya and ate omelet containing fried rice. It was very delicious!! We were very happy!!

After that we watched some clothed and I wanted to buy red coat but it was not there. I bought some clothes and tights. She had a class at six and I had a part-time job so that we went to school at about 17:50. Thanks to her, I enjoyed very much. Thank you Haruka!!

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☆November 26☆

I went to Pasta Lista with my friends, Kouhei, Haruka, Youko and Yuki. Haruka and I like pasta very much!! Have you ever been to Pasta Lista? There is near Youme Town in hikarinomori. The restaurant is very cute and pasta are very delicious.

We talked and laughed a lot!! It was very nice day for me!!

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☆November 21☆

I went to downtown with my friends, Hikaru and Nami. We went to same high school and Hikaru and I were same class for 3 years. Name and we were not same class but we were very good friends when we entered high school.
First, I wanted to go shopping so that we went to Parco. We went to a lot of shops to buy some clothes but we didn’t have a lot of money so that I bought only one cloth. After shopping, we went to take some print club pictures. We laughed very much!! Next, we went to Toritetsu to eat yakitori. We drank very much!! I love drinking so much!! Especially, I love wine very much!! I like wine both white and red. After having dinner, we went to take print club pictures again. We talked a lot and laughed a lot. We didn’t enough time to talk. It was very nice day for me!!
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Speaking

1,What's your grade?1,(20) 2,(73) 3,(10) 4,(7)

2,What's your faculty?F,(82) E,(22) C,(9) D,(7)

3,Are you a man or woman?Man,(44) Woman,(76)

4, Do you eat lunch in univerasity?Yes,(118) No, (2)

5, Do you like Gakushoku better than bakery?Yes,(15) No,(105)

6, How offten do you use Gkushoku?a, 1 b, 2～3 c, more d, noa,(102) b,(0) c,(0) d,(8)

7, Do you like tea better than cafe?Y(98) ,N(22)

8, Do you want larger bakery?Y(120), N(0)

9 Do you want larger bakery?
Y 119 N 1

10 What do you like the best in bakery?
1 cheese 2 chocolate 3 rusk

11 What do you like the best at gakusyoku?
1 katsu rice 2 curry 3 tantanmen

12 What kind of tea do you like?
A lemon (72) B peach (8 ) C apple (1) D other (8)

13 When do you go to café?
A talking (97) B take a rest (13) C studying (2) D other (8)

14 Do you use café?
Y (112) N (8)

15 How much do you use in café?
1 500yen 2 700yen 3 300yen

16 How long do you stay in café?
1 1 hour 2 30 minutes 3 2 hours 4 5 hours

17 Do you want a Star backes in university?
Y 120 N 0

Who do you like to go cafe with?
a. friends(119) b.senior or lunior(1) c.family(0) d.other(0)

Do you like cake better than parfait?
yes(117) no(3)

What kind of desserts do you like?
1.cake 2.yoghurt 3.chocolate

Do you like fast food?
yes(120) no(0)

What's do you like the best?
a.mac(111) b.kenchiki(3) c.mos(13) d.other(3)

What's cafe do you like?
starbacks

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☆Chinese Noodle☆

I went to eat Chinese noodle with Haruka.　We had a part-time job till 23:00. After finishing part-time job, we went to tatsunoya. We like Chinese noodle too. We went to tatsunoya in Wnder City. The boss of the tatsunoya was very friendly and funny!! We like him very much!! If you want to eat Chinese noodle, please go to tatsunoya in Wnder City!!

I had very good time with Haruka.

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November 18

I went to eat sushi with my friend, Haruka. We like sushi too!! After school, we wanted to eat sushi so that we go there!! We ate about 8 dishes. Teo men sat next to us and they ate 6 dishes!! We ate more than them!!

After eating sushi, we bought a cake and went to my house to eat cake!! We bought it at shiawasesagashi. It is very nice cake shop!!

We talked a lot and laughed a lot. I like to spend with her very much.It was very nice day!! Thank you Haruka!!

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Draft essays 2-03a

I introduce myself. First is elementary school. I went to miyuki elementary school. It is very near from my house. It just cost 3 minutes!!! But I and my sister went to school about 15 minutes!! It is very unbelievable!! I had belonged to kendo club since I was 7 years old to 10 years old and had belonged to brass band club since I was 11 years old to 12 years old. It was very hard for me to play Kendo but it is very fun for me. Thanks for it, I have perseverance, I think. I would often play with neighborhood after school. We usually played tag!! I liked very much. My father was business bachelor for 2 years so that my family went to Takamori once a week. It snowed a lot in winter so that my sister and I often played outside. It was very fun!!
Next is junior high school. I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study.
Third is high school. I went to Kyusyu Gakuin high school. I liked English so that my major was English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. Our school is Christianity so that we had religious education once a week. It was very interesting!! I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and played the flute. It is fun but I wanted to study more so that I gave up belonging it. In my life, spending Kyusyu Gakuin was very wonderful day for me.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. But I like this university!! Because my friends are very wonderful person, I think. I decided to study English very hard when I entered university.
I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!

I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now.A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I had practiced the piano since I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day.I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.

I could not go to high school where I wanted to go. But I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me.
I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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Outlining

○ Elementary School
➢ I went to miyuki elementary shcool.
➢ I belonged Kendo club for 4 years.
➢ I had practiced the piano and violin.
➢ I often played with neighborhood.
➢ My father was business bachelor for 2 years so that my family went to Takamori once a week.

○ Junior high school
➢ I like to study English.
➢ I studied very hard in crime school.

○ High school
➢ I went to Kyusyu Gakuin high school and my major was English for 3 years.
➢ I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and played the flute.
➢ My class had 10 classes in a day.
➢ I had a religious education.

○ University and outside activity
➢ I go to KGU and my major is English.
➢ I have a part-time job and work a crime school.

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Free writing

I had practiced the piano for 15 years and practiced the violin for 10 years.
When I was 7 years old, I belonged Kendo club for 4 years. I liked to play with neighborhood. When I was elementary school’s student, my father was business bachelor so that my family went there once a week. I went to KG high school and my major was English because I like English very much. I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and played the flute. I studied a lot of subjects very hard because I had wanted to go Kumamoto University. My class had 10 classes in a day. It was very hard for me but it was very full days far me. I had a religious education in high school. It was very interesting education. I liked to go KG high school very much. It was very great memory for me.
I go to KGU and my major is English. I have a part-time job and work a crime school where I went in high school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. It is very difficult for me but it is very interesting.
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Birthday Party!!

We had a birthday party for Mr. Okamura. Haruka and I went to buy a birthday cake at 7:30 in the morning. We had reserved 1 week before!! The cake shop's name is Shiawasesagashi near the lake Ezu. The cakes of the shop is very cute and very delicious. What is more, prices are not high!! After buying the cake, we went to school hastily!!

In the class, we had a party for Mr. Okamura. He was very glad so that we were very happy!! It was very good time for us!!

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♪SPAIN♪

I had a part-time job for Eiken with my friend, Kouhei. We had to lead students to classroom. It was very cold day so that we were very cold!! We warked from8:00 to 16:00. It was no so hard. I enjoyed the work because I could work with Kouhei. I like him very much!!

After that I went to downdown because I had a dinner with Spanish's class. There are 6 students in Spanish's class. Mr. Okamura treated us a dinner!! We ate Mexican dinner and they were very delicious. Next Mr. Okamura took us to cocktail bar. I drank a little. I love wine very much!! Have you drunk hot wine? It is very very very delicious!! Please drink it!!

After that, I went to marusyou with my friend, Haruka. We are same class of Spanish. We ate some yakitori and drank a little. We talked a lot.

She stayed my house that night and we talked a lot of things in my room!! It was very nice day!!

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☆Buen☆

I went to Buen with my friends, Nami and Hikaru. We went to same high school so that we are very good friends. Have you ever been to Buen? It is very nice restaurant!! We can eat parfait as much as I can eat. I ate pasta and parfait. They were very delicious and I like the mood of restaurant very much!!

After that we went to a lot of shop. I wanted to buy some clothes but I had not enough money so that I just looked some clothes.

I like Nami and Hikaru very much because I need not to bother and can disburden to them!!

We talked a lot of things, laughed a lot and drank!! I had a very good time with them!!

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☆Yakitori☆

I went to Marusyo with my friend, Haruka. We like pasta and yakitori the best!! So we went there to eat a lot of yakitori. It was my first time to go there. Have you been there? I like there very much!! Especially, I like sasami very much!! They were very delicious. I think that sasami of marusyo is the best!!
After that Haruka stayed my house and thubasa came my house after finishing his part- time job. We talked a lot of things and thought a lot. It was a very good time for me!!
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☆CAKE☆

I went to Quatorze juillet with my friend, Haruka. We wanted to eat cake so that we went there. Look this picture!! They look very delicious!! We ate two cakes. They were very delicious!! We felt happy because we like sweets very much. We talked a lot and laughed a lot !! I like to spend time with her very much!!

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Revise essay 2-02b World history

It is very great I watched two movies from the website. They were about Egypt and The Ice Age. I have leaned a little about Egypt. But I did not know particular about the country. I have also leaned The Ice Age but I did not know detailed about the age. That movie gave me a lot kind of knowledge.

I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country so that I have watched a TV program before about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie from the website showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.

I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife and which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.

I think that I’m happy because there are a lot of convenient things in the world.
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BR 2-02: The Three Little Pigs

I have read this story many times. This story is about three little pigs and a and wolf. The wolf wanted to eat three pigs. They built their own house. But the wolf was always behind them!! So that they cooperate with each other, they could pull down the bad wolf!! They could live safely.

I think that it is very important to help each other. This story is a very good story!!

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Driving

I went driving with my friends, Youko and Akane. It is very fun for me so that I like to go driving with them. At first, we went to Doutonbori to eat lunch. We ate okonomiyaki. It was very delicious!! After that, we went to Amakusa. But we lost the way!!! I often lose the way when I go driving. The sea was beautiful. Although we arrived Amakusa, we had nothing what we want to do. So we went back Kumamoto city. At night we went to hakataichibann. Because we want to eat yakitori!! I like yakitori very much!! It was very delicious!!

We talked a lot of thing and we laughed a lot!! I enjoyed very much with them!! I like Youko and Akane very much!!

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Speaking 4

At first, I introduce my hobby.
I like listening to music very much. My favorite singers are Sayuri Sugawara, YU-A and Syouta Shimizu. I like their songs very much because I can sympathize their words!! I listen to their music every day; my room, in my car and so on. It is very important for me to listen to music.
I like to go driving too. I got a driver's lisence about 4 months ago. I like driving and I like my car very much!! In my car, I can very relax. I often go driving with my friends. But I like to go driving alone too. In the case, I can think a lot of things with listening to music that I like. I like driving very much!!

Next, I introduce my friends' hobby.
First, I intoduce Mao. She likes listening to music very much. She always listening to music by ipod. It has a lot of songs so that ipot is very useful, I think. Music makes her relax!!
Next, I introduce Jyousuke. He likes to play the piano and plays jazz piano. I can play the piano but I have never played jazz piano. He has played the piano since 18 years old. It is very good thing for him to play the piano.
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Pasta ☆ Pizza

I went to karaoke with Haruka and Kouhei. They sing very well, I think. I like to go karaoke with them. We sang about for 4 hours. After that, I went to Jolly Pasta with Haruka. We like pasta very much!! We ate pasta and pizza. We were very satisfied!! We talked a lot of things. I like to be with her!! Thanks to her, I could have a very good time. Thank you Haruka!!!

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I went driving with my friend, Haruka. At first we went to lake Ezu. But we lost the way. Thank for it, we foud a very nice cake shop!! It's name is Shiawasesagashi. We bought some cakes and they were very cute!! Then we go to Mt. Dokko. We ate lunch and the cakes. We talked a lot of things. The weather was very nice so that we enjoyed very much. After that we went shopping to buy some drinks. We bought wine and ume liqueur. I like them very much!! After finishing my part-time job, Haruka and Thubasa came my house. She stayed my house but he got back home at midnight. We talked a lot of things. I was glad to stay with them!!

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Draft essay post: 2-02a

I watched two movies. They were about Egypt and The Ice Age. I have leaned a little about Egypt. But I did not know particular about the country. I have also leaned The Ice Age but I did not know detailed about the age. That movie gave me a lot kind of knowledge.I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country. So that I have watched the TV program about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.

I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.
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Ancient Egypt & Living in the ice age

Ancient Egypt
http://www.childrensuniversity.manchester.ac.uk/interactives/history/egypt/egyptianmap.asp

Living in the ice age
http://www.phschool.com/atschool/california/webcodes/history_interactive/mwp-1013/common_player.html

I thought that ancient egypt has a lot of history. I had well done the game in the site!!
It is very difficult for me to live like an ice age.
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Essays2-01bFavPlace.doc

My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.

I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for us. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.

I like the place where is in my car. I got a drivers license six months ago. So I go to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and Syouta Shimizu. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs make me move very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.

I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
(308words)

Speaking Homework

Hello!! How are you??
I introduce myself and my summer vacation.

I’m Tomoko so that please call me Tomoko. I’m 20 years old and my birthday is April 13. There are 4 people in my family: father, mother, sister and me. My older sister married last year and has a baby. Her baby is a boy and his name is Kakeru. He is very cute!!! I’m still 20 years old but I am an aunt!!! It is very surprising for me!!! His husband is very kind and friendly. He takes care of me as if I were his little sister. So I like him very much!!! They are very good couple so that I want to be couple when I marry.

My summer vacation in this year is very hard for me because of my part-time job. I work in crime school and teach English grammar and Japanese. It is very hard for me but teaching students is very interesting for me. Some students talk a lot of things with me. For example, the course on their future, love affair and so on. It is very hard but I am glad to talk it with me. I worked almost every day in summer vacation. But it is very full for me.
I went driving with my friends and went to Aso a little times. I like Aso because the nature is very beautiful, hot springs is very good and stars are very beautiful!!
My summer vacation is very hard for me but I enjoyed very much.
(256words)

Essay2-01a FavPlace.doc

My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.
I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for you. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place in my car. I got a driver’s license six months ago. So I do to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and　清水翔太. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs moved very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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Favorite places2

 Bathroom
Listening to music, singing, thinking a lot of things
 My room
Listening to music, talking my friends, drinking, sleeping
 Veranda
Watching the sky and the moon
 The place I can see night view
Seeing a lot of stars, talking with my friends
 My car
Go driving, listening to music, talking and laughing with my friends
 Starbucks coffee
Talking with my friends, drinking coffee
 Bakery in the university
Having breads, talking with my friends
 Karaoke
Singing, talking with my friends, having something
 The place in the corner of my room
Thinking a lot of things
 On the grass
Could relax
 Bar
Talking with my friends, drinking and laghing
 ASO
Going driving
 Mt. Tawara
Looking at the star
 LION
Watching fountain, excited
 Mt. Hankou in Koushi
Having breakfast, talking with my friends
 Mt. dokko
Looking at night view
 Parking area in Kenngeki
Talking with my friends in a car
 Haruka's house
Enjoying a lot of things

favorite places

bathroom
my room
veranda
the place I can see night view
my car
starbucks coffee
bakery in the university
karaoke
the place in the corner of my room
on the grass
bar
ASO
Mt. Tawara
LION
Mt. Hankou in Koushi
Mt. dokko
parking area in Kenngeki
Haruka's house

BR 2-01: A Dog Named Sam

This book is written a dog named Sam and has three stories about Sam.
Sam loved to fetch more than any other things. Sam fetched shoes, clothed and newspapers. He could please father, Molly and Noah. But he fetched the whole clothesline so that mother was angry. But he fetched Molly and Noah so that Sam pleased mother. I think he is a very cute dog!!
Sam loved swimming very much. He wanted to swim in the sea or pool but people didn't like swimming with a dog. So he couldn't swim when he wanted to. One day Molly and Noah swam in a pool in thier garden. Sam jumped into the water!! They were very suprised but they were happy. Sam could swim with them so that he was very happy!! This story made me happy!!
In night, Sam sang, barked and howl many times so that his familly could sleep well. Because he was very miss, he howl!! I think he is a lonely dog. But in morning, he enjoyed a lot of things with his familly so that he was very happy!! This story was a little sad but the last was very happy story, I think.
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Boland, J. (1996). A Dog Named SAM. New York: Puffin Books.

September 21

I had an end the work off with a drinking party in my part-time job. There are different university students in my part-time job. So I could listen to a lot of kind story!! We went to post-party party and drank a lot. After that, we went to karaoke at 3 a.m. We talked a lot, drank a lot, sang a lot of songs and laughed!! It was very interesting party!!
(71words)

September 19

Kouhei and Haruka stayed my house. At first, we went to karaoke for 3 hours. And then, we ate dinner in my house. My mother cooked dinner for us!! I like her dish very much. After dinner, we went to driving to watch stars to Mt tawara. It was very cold but there were a lot of stars. They were very beautiful. After that we went back in my house. We drank rice brandy. It is very strong rice brandy so that we got drunk!! We talked a lot of things, sang and laughed a lot!! I enjoyed very much with them!!!!
(102words)

September 3

I stayed Haruka's house. We went driving a lot of places. This picture is the best place!! We went some hotels. When we saw this hotel, we were very excited!! This hotel was very beautiful!! We went to Mt. Tawara to see night view but it was a little cold.
Next day, we went to karaoke about for 3 hours. And then we went to hotel again!! Thought it was daytime, that hotel was very beautiful!!
I could enjoy with Haruka very much!!
(83words)

My identity

Hi!! My name is Mary. I'm from Spain and I'm 25 years old. There are 4 people in my family: father, mother and younger brother. I like scuba very much so that I often go to see to scuba when I have free time. I hate high places because I fall down from the tree when I was 5 years old.
I work as a TV announcer. My joub is very hard but I like my job very much!!

I found funny man. His name is Bolt. He is from Jamaica and he is a pro sport player. He took part in the olympic!! It is very great thing. His hobby is Judo. He likes sports very much. But he doesn't like dogs. I laughed at the comment. I think he is very friendly man!!
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My action plan

I read my friend’s blog. I think that they use a lot of pictures on their blog so that their blog are very great. They say that we try to write everyday (Shiori, 2009,07,3), write more cute (Hanako, 2007, 07,13), write more own words (RieM, 2007,07,9) and put a lot of interesting pictures (Shiori, 2009, 07,03).
I will try to write more and write everyday with a lot of pictures.
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Blog handles Blog titles Post titles Post dates URLs
Hanako Hanako's blogg Portfolio for Writing III 13.Jul http://hanako0814-hanako.blogspot.com/search?updated-max=2009-07-17T18%3A52%3A00%2B09%3A00&max-results=7
Haruna Haruna's blog Portfolio for Writing III 8.Jul http://harunasblog.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
Yuria Yuria's blog Portfolio for Writing III 24.Jul http://yuriasblog.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
Rie RieM's diary Portfolio for Writing III 9.Jul http://riemsdiary.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
Shiori Shiori's blog Portfolio for Writing III 3.Jul http://shioris.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html

See Off

August 17, I went to Center to see Marcus off with Jacob and Eiko. He had to go back England so that I see him off. We really miss him because we like him very much.
Until riding a bus, we talked a lot of things. I was very glad to meet him. Since we went to see him off, he was pleased very much so that we were very happy.
After seeing him off, Jacob and I went driving. We talked a lot and laughed a lot. Next month, Jacob has to go back England. I think that I will miss him. We decided to go driving before he goes back England.
We miss Marcus but he could go back England safely so that we are very glad.
I think that I study English hard and want to Englad to meet him!!
(143words)

DOWN TOWN

August 15, I went to Down Town with Hikaru and Asami. They ant I went to same high school and we are very good friends. Hikaru go to University in Misumi and Asami go to Kumamoto Gakuen University but she and I are different faculty.
We went shopping and I bought some clothes. I was very happy to buy them. It was very hot day so that we went to karaoke about for 3 hours. We sang a lot of songs. I like AZU. Do you know her? I like her songs very much because I can sympathize her words.
After that we went to izakaya. I drank a lot. I like drinking very much!! Especialy I like wine very much!!
I could enjoy talking with them so much.
(129words)

Jeff's Word Bar

August 14, I went to Jeff's Word Bar with Kouhei, Eiko, Jacob and Marcus. Jacob and Marcus are from England. Jacob is overseas student in Kumamoto University. Marcus came Kumamoto to meet Jacob. They are very friendly and humorous. I like them very much. They speak Japanease very well so that I was very suprised.
I like Jeff's Bar very much!! When I go there, I can meet Jeff so that I like there!! I like Jeff very much!! He is very friendly and kind. I think that he is a very nice teacher.
We talked a lot of thing and laughed so much. I had a very good time with them!!
(112words)

Yatsushiro

August 13, my mother and I went to Yatsushiro to meet grandmother and visit a grave. At first, we visited a grave. After that, we went to see my grandmother. She is 88 years old. She strains her legs but she is full of energy. I saw her after an visit of 6 months. We talked a lot of things. I was happy to meet her.
(66words)

Firework

Hello!! How are you? Do you enjoy your summer vacation? I enjoy summer vacation very much!!
August 7, I went to Tamana to see fireworks with Kouhei and Eiko. After finished my part-time job, Kouhei took us to Tamana by his car. In his car, we laughed very much!! In fact, I wanted to wear Kimono but it was very hot day so that I did not wear it.
In Tamana, there were a lot of people so I felt very sticky. But I could enjoy!! Because fireworks were very beautiful!! I thought that I was very happy to watch them with Kouhei and Eiko. I could enjoy very much!!
(110words)

July 30

I finished all the test yesterday so that I was very happy. After finished my test, I went to karaoke with Kouhei and Haruka. We sang a lot of songs for 4 hours. It was very interesting!! Kouhei and Haruka sing very well!!
After that we went driving with Tsubasa. We went to eat dinner. We ate hamburg. It was delicious. After dinner, we went to Hanaokayama to see the night view. It was very beautiful!! I like the night view very much.
We talked about a lot of things. I enjoyed with them very much!!!
(96words)

My ideal...

My ideal couple is my grandfather and my grandmother. They are the best couple, I think. My grandfather was very friendly, kind for all people, hard worker and dreat man. My grandmother is very cheerful, cooking very well, very smart and great woman.
My grand father died when I was 17 years old. I was very sad and cried so much. Because I like him very much. My grandfather and grandmother took care of them each other. I think that it is very wonderful thing.
The day before my grandfather died, he said to my grandmother "I am very happy because I could marry and live with you. I am sorry to bother you a lot of things. I am very thamkful you. Thank you for marrying me". I heard it from her. I moved his words.
I think he loved her very much and she loves him stil now. I think that they troubles a lot of things but they were happy. I want to marry like them.
(169words)

July 20

I went to down town to study with Eiko. She and I work at same part-time job's place. She is two years older than I. She is very friendly and kind. She always guids me in a lot of things.
We went shopping at first. After that we went to Caffe to eat lunch and study. We studied hard very much. Next, we went shopping a lot of places. I like to go shopping very much!! I want to buy a lot of clothes but I cannot to buy a lot of clothes because I don't have a lot of money. Next, we took a print club pictures.
I went to down town with her after a long days. I enjpyed very much!!
(123words)

July 18

I went driving with Youko and Akane. We went to same high school but we don't know well each other.
I had a class after that we went driving. First, we went to Pasta Lista to eat pasta. I like the restaurant the best. I think that the restaurant is the most delicious resutaurant. It is near the youmetown, hikarinomori. Please go there!!
Next, we went to Kikuchi. We wanted to go Kikuchi Suigenn but we lost the way so that we gave up going there. After that, we went to Yamaga. We lost the way again!! I often lost the way in driving because I had no plan in driving. I listend a lot of music for example, "西野カナ", EXILE, and so on. I like these songs very much.
Next, we went to starbucks coffee. I like there very much. I often go there with my friends. It's coffee are very delicious so that I like there so much!!
After that we went to karaoke for about 2 hours. We sang a lot of songs. Recently, I like karaoke very much because I can reduce stress.
After driving, I went back my grandmother's house. I like to stay her house very much. Because she is very good grandmother, I think. At midnight, I went to karaoke again with Tsubasa. After finished his part-time job, we went to karaoke for about 4 hours. I sang a lot of songs that day. I enjoyed very much!!
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July 17

I had no classes yesterday so I was able to relax in yesterday's morning. I went to university to went driving with Haruka and Tsubasa. They had a class but they finished at 10:30.
First, we went to Kumamoto University. There are a lot of buildings so that we lost the way. It was very hot and rainy yesterday. In the building, it was very hot so we were very surprised because Kumamoto Gakuenn Univeysity is very comfortable in the buildings. After that, we went to karaoke. Recently, we often go to karaoke. Haruka and Tsubasa sing very well!! We sang a lot of songs and talked about a lot of things. Haruka and I had to go because we had a part-time job. I wanted to stay with them. After my part-time job, I went to my grandmother's house in Kikuchi. In midnight, I could go there only 30 minutes.
I could enjoy very much with Haruka and Tsubasa. I want to go a lot of places with them!!
(170words)

Liro and Stitch 2

I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.

First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.

In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.

Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.

In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.

I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
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Liro and Stitch 1

I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.

First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.

In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.

Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. B ecause they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.

In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I can enjoy doing a lot of things. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.

I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
(351words)

BR 1-11 : The Gingerbread Man

I have read this book written in Japanease a lot of times when I was a childwood. This story is about a little old man, a little old woman, the gingerbread man and a few cildren. The old man and woman lived happily but they had no children. So they cooked a boy out of gingerbread. When she opened the oven, the gingerbread jumped and ran away. The gingerbread man ran away and ran way. But the gingerbread man could not to swim and could not go over the river. The fox helped the gingerbread man. But the fox ate the gingerbread man in the fox.
This story is very suprisingly!! I think that it is bad thing to do what I want to.
(124words)

Portfolio for Writting lll

Student ID: vwxyz
[Please replace "vwxyz" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

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(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)
1-01b (2009.04.20)
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1-02a (2009.06.01)
1-02b (2009.07.06)
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1-03a (2009.06.29)
1-03b (2009.07.13)
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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

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2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

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3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01
BR 1-02
BR 1-03
BR 1-04
BR 1-05
BR 1-06
BR 1-07
BR 1-08
BR 1-09
BR 1-10
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

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2. ...

3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).