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2009年12月17日木曜日

Draft essays 2-03b

I introduce why I study English. When I went to miyuki elementary school, I would often watch western movie because my mother and my elder sister like it very much. And now, I like it so much.
When I went to junior high school, I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study. Not only studying English but also listening to western music. I like Britney and Ne-yo the best.
When I went to high school, Kyusyu Gakuin, I liked English so that my major had been English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. I studied English very hard but it is not hardship for me because I like English very much.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. My friends are very wonderful person so that I like this university!! I decided to study English very hard when I entered university. I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now. A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I practiced the piano I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me to play both piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day. I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think that “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go, but I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me. I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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2009年7月15日水曜日

Liro and Stitch 2

I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.

First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.

In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.

Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.

In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.

I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
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