Draft essays 2-03b

I introduce why I study English. When I went to miyuki elementary school, I would often watch western movie because my mother and my elder sister like it very much. And now, I like it so much.
When I went to junior high school, I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study. Not only studying English but also listening to western music. I like Britney and Ne-yo the best.
When I went to high school, Kyusyu Gakuin, I liked English so that my major had been English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. I studied English very hard but it is not hardship for me because I like English very much.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. My friends are very wonderful person so that I like this university!! I decided to study English very hard when I entered university. I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now. A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I practiced the piano I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me to play both piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day. I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think that “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go, but I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me. I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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Revise essay 2-02b World history

It is very great I watched two movies from the website. They were about Egypt and The Ice Age. I have leaned a little about Egypt. But I did not know particular about the country. I have also leaned The Ice Age but I did not know detailed about the age. That movie gave me a lot kind of knowledge.

I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country so that I have watched a TV program before about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie from the website showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.

I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife and which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.

I think that I’m happy because there are a lot of convenient things in the world.
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Ancient Egypt & Living in the ice age

Ancient Egypt
http://www.childrensuniversity.manchester.ac.uk/interactives/history/egypt/egyptianmap.asp

Living in the ice age
http://www.phschool.com/atschool/california/webcodes/history_interactive/mwp-1013/common_player.html

I thought that ancient egypt has a lot of history. I had well done the game in the site!!
It is very difficult for me to live like an ice age.
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Liro and Stitch 2

I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.

First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.

In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.

Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.

In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.

I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
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BR 1-07: Puss in Boots

I have read this story a lot of times. This story is about a very wise cat and his owner. The owner is called Tom. His cat wanted to Boots and also he could talk. His cat has plenty ideas up his sleeve. Thanks to his cat, Tom and his cat could live happly. I like this cat. Because he is not only cute but also very wise. This story is very interesting, I think.
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BR 1-06: The Twelve Dancing Princesses

This story is about twelve Princesses. The thing they liked the best is dancing. They danced every night without thier hather's knowing. Thier father hated dance and prohobited to dance. One night they were founded by father, but he allowed to dance. And then they lived happily. I dont' like thier father at first, but I like him. Because he allowed them that they wanted to do.
I think it is happy that we can do which we want to do.
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BR 1-05: The Frog Prince

This story is about a princess who is decided a marriage partner. She hated him so that she didn't want to marry him. To decide a marriage partner is very sad thing, I thought. But she could marry she loved because her father allowed. I thought her father was very good man. This story made me happy so much!!
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BR 1-04: Mermaids

Why I chose this book, I like the story of mermaid. This book consists of three stories of mermaids.
First story is about daughter and her mother. The daughter's name is Harmony. She has a courage very much. Because her mother was very sick so that she found a medichine in danger place. Thanks her action, her mother got better. I think she is very kind and great.
Second story is about bad mermaid. She planed to steal a Pearl. Finally, she was founded. It is worst thing that steal someones.
Third story is about that a mermaid called Coral wants to legs and want to dunce.
I like swimming the best so that I thought I wanted to tail. But after finished reading this story, I think legs are better than tail.
This book is very interesting!!!
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BR 1-03: Hansel & Gretel

I have read this story many times since I was a little girl. Hansel and Gretel are very good brothers. I like this brothers so much!! I don't like this stepmother because she is very spiteful!! I thought that thier father had to protect them.
I am very grad that Handel and Gratel were saved and was able to meet their father. I like this story very much.　
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BR 1-02: Rapunzel

I have read this book written in Japanease when I was only a little girl. This story was a little different from a written in Japanease.
I think the name that Rapunzel is a little funny because it is the same name as a vegetable.
Because Rapunzel was stolen from her parents by witch, I think that she and her parents very pity. If I were she, I could not enjoy lives with the witch. Rapunzel and Prince could marry so that I was very glad. This story made me happy!!
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BR 1-01: DAD'S TRICK

I read DAD'S TRICK. This book's story is about one family. There is s girl who got her first pimple. It was one of the ugliest things for her. She was very upset and didn't want to go shopping to buy a medichine. But she went to a store with her father. In the store, some children made fun of her because of her pimple. When she wanted to cry, her father screened her from blame. His way moved me. This book made me very happy.
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