I introduce why I study English. When I went to miyuki elementary school, I would often watch western movie because my mother and my elder sister like it very much. And now, I like it so much.
When I went to junior high school, I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study. Not only studying English but also listening to western music. I like Britney and Ne-yo the best.
When I went to high school, Kyusyu Gakuin, I liked English so that my major had been English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. I studied English very hard but it is not hardship for me because I like English very much.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. My friends are very wonderful person so that I like this university!! I decided to study English very hard when I entered university. I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now. A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I practiced the piano I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me to play both piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day. I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think that “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go, but I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me. I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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2009年12月17日木曜日
2009年11月28日土曜日
Draft essays 2-03a
I introduce myself. First is elementary school. I went to miyuki elementary school. It is very near from my house. It just cost 3 minutes!!! But I and my sister went to school about 15 minutes!! It is very unbelievable!! I had belonged to kendo club since I was 7 years old to 10 years old and had belonged to brass band club since I was 11 years old to 12 years old. It was very hard for me to play Kendo but it is very fun for me. Thanks for it, I have perseverance, I think. I would often play with neighborhood after school. We usually played tag!! I liked very much. My father was business bachelor for 2 years so that my family went to Takamori once a week. It snowed a lot in winter so that my sister and I often played outside. It was very fun!!
Next is junior high school. I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study.
Third is high school. I went to Kyusyu Gakuin high school. I liked English so that my major was English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. Our school is Christianity so that we had religious education once a week. It was very interesting!! I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and played the flute. It is fun but I wanted to study more so that I gave up belonging it. In my life, spending Kyusyu Gakuin was very wonderful day for me.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. But I like this university!! Because my friends are very wonderful person, I think. I decided to study English very hard when I entered university.
I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now.A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I had practiced the piano since I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day.I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go. But I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me.
I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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Next is junior high school. I like to study English very much. I didn’t belong to club and I went to crime school. I studied very hard because of entrance examination for high school. I hated science so that it was very hard to study.
Third is high school. I went to Kyusyu Gakuin high school. I liked English so that my major was English for 3 years. Our class had 10 classes in a day so that we studied very hard. It was very hard for me but I studied for entrance examination for university. Our school is Christianity so that we had religious education once a week. It was very interesting!! I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and played the flute. It is fun but I wanted to study more so that I gave up belonging it. In my life, spending Kyusyu Gakuin was very wonderful day for me.
Now, I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. In fact, I wanted to Kumamoto University for a long time but it didn’t come true. I thought many times “I should have studied more”. But I like this university!! Because my friends are very wonderful person, I think. I decided to study English very hard when I entered university.
I will go abroad to England about for 10 months. I have wanted to go abroad for a long time so that I am looking forward to go there very much!!!
I want to continue to study English. I want to take a job using English and other language. I study Spanish too and I am very interested in Spanish now.A few years ago, I had two dreams. First, I wanted to be a police officer because my father is a police officer. He sometimes talks me about his job. I am interested in the job very much. Second, I wanted to be a music teacher. I had practiced the piano since I was 3 years old to 18 years old and had practiced the violin when I was 8 years old to 18 years old. My teacher taught me piano and violin. Her playing is very great!! I like to listen to her playing very much. I like music very much. My teacher is very wonderful person so that I wanted to be a music teacher like her. But my dream is changing a little day by day.I don’t have a dream clear now. I have a part-time job and work in a crime school. I teach English grammar and classic Japanese. Recently, I often think “I like to teach” so that I have thought about teacher in high school.
I could not go to high school where I wanted to go. But I was very glad to go Kyusyu Gakuin high school. It was very wonderful memory to spend there for me.
I couldn’t go to university where I wanted to go so that I decide to study English very hard.
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2009年11月11日水曜日
Revise essay 2-02b World history
It is very great I watched two movies from the website. They were about Egypt and The Ice Age. I have leaned a little about Egypt. But I did not know particular about the country. I have also leaned The Ice Age but I did not know detailed about the age. That movie gave me a lot kind of knowledge.
I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country so that I have watched a TV program before about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie from the website showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.
I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife and which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.
I think that I’m happy because there are a lot of convenient things in the world.
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I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country so that I have watched a TV program before about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie from the website showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.
I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife and which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.
I think that I’m happy because there are a lot of convenient things in the world.
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2009年10月21日水曜日
Essays2-01bFavPlace.doc
My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.
I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for us. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place where is in my car. I got a drivers license six months ago. So I go to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and Syouta Shimizu. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs make me move very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for us. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place where is in my car. I got a drivers license six months ago. So I go to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and Syouta Shimizu. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs make me move very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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2009年10月17日土曜日
Essay2-01a FavPlace.doc
My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.
I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for you. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place in my car. I got a driver’s license six months ago. So I do to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and 清水翔太. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs moved very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for you. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place in my car. I got a driver’s license six months ago. So I do to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and 清水翔太. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs moved very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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2009年7月15日水曜日
Liro and Stitch 2
I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.
First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
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First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
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2009年6月10日水曜日
Essay 1-01b: Letter to host family
Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith
Hello!!
My name is Tomoko. I'm 19 years old. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. There are 4 people in my family and a dog: father, mother, older sister, me and a dog(TOTO). My father is a policeman and my mother is a housewife. My sister is 23 years old and gave birth to a boy last October.
I like to watch movies and listening to music very much. I especially like "Pirates of Caribean" the best. I've watched it at least 7 times. I like Orlando Bloum very much and I watched all his movies. In music, I like "Britney Spears" very much. She is very cute, her dance is very sexy and she is a very good singer. I have her all CDs. I've heard that she is not liked in your country like Japan. Is it true?
I like music not listening but playing. I'm not a good player but I like playing the piano, violin and flute. I've taken lessons in the piano since I was 3 years old. Though I had stopped studying for the entrance examination, I started again when I became a college student.
It is my first time to visit England. I have wanted to go for a long time. So I'm very excited. I love the senery like England very much. You have a lot of very beautiful scenery. I also like to go shopping. I want to go London, and to buy lots of clothes.
What I want to do the best is study English. When I speak mistaken English, please teach me. I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Sincerely,
Your friend,
Tomoko Chijiwa
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Hello!!
My name is Tomoko. I'm 19 years old. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. There are 4 people in my family and a dog: father, mother, older sister, me and a dog(TOTO). My father is a policeman and my mother is a housewife. My sister is 23 years old and gave birth to a boy last October.
I like to watch movies and listening to music very much. I especially like "Pirates of Caribean" the best. I've watched it at least 7 times. I like Orlando Bloum very much and I watched all his movies. In music, I like "Britney Spears" very much. She is very cute, her dance is very sexy and she is a very good singer. I have her all CDs. I've heard that she is not liked in your country like Japan. Is it true?
I like music not listening but playing. I'm not a good player but I like playing the piano, violin and flute. I've taken lessons in the piano since I was 3 years old. Though I had stopped studying for the entrance examination, I started again when I became a college student.
It is my first time to visit England. I have wanted to go for a long time. So I'm very excited. I love the senery like England very much. You have a lot of very beautiful scenery. I also like to go shopping. I want to go London, and to buy lots of clothes.
What I want to do the best is study English. When I speak mistaken English, please teach me. I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Sincerely,
Your friend,
Tomoko Chijiwa
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2009年5月27日水曜日
Essay 1-02a: University Life
We are university student and go to Kumamoto Gakuenn University. There are a lot of faculties. We have economics, social welfare, the department of commerical science and foreign language.
I think that going university is able to find our dream and the thing we want to try. We study hard every day. Different from high school, we can major what we want to study. We are able to study with enjoying. We have to have a sense of responsibility.
In university, there are a lot of clubs. After school, lots students enjoy their club. I think KGU have a lot of clubs than other university. KGU have a lot of places to study and talk with our friends. I always stay in bakery with my fruends and enjoy talking.
Some students go to university by car and motor bicycle. When we were high school student, it is impossible. I can get a driver's lisence resently but I cannot go by car. A lot of university students have a part-time job. They work their office after school.
Many university student not only studying hard. For example, part-time job. If we have a sense of responsibiloity, we can lead a full time in university.
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I think that going university is able to find our dream and the thing we want to try. We study hard every day. Different from high school, we can major what we want to study. We are able to study with enjoying. We have to have a sense of responsibility.
In university, there are a lot of clubs. After school, lots students enjoy their club. I think KGU have a lot of clubs than other university. KGU have a lot of places to study and talk with our friends. I always stay in bakery with my fruends and enjoy talking.
Some students go to university by car and motor bicycle. When we were high school student, it is impossible. I can get a driver's lisence resently but I cannot go by car. A lot of university students have a part-time job. They work their office after school.
Many university student not only studying hard. For example, part-time job. If we have a sense of responsibiloity, we can lead a full time in university.
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