I had no classes yesterday so I was able to relax in yesterday's morning. I went to university to went driving with Haruka and Tsubasa. They had a class but they finished at 10:30.
First, we went to Kumamoto University. There are a lot of buildings so that we lost the way. It was very hot and rainy yesterday. In the building, it was very hot so we were very surprised because Kumamoto Gakuenn Univeysity is very comfortable in the buildings. After that, we went to karaoke. Recently, we often go to karaoke. Haruka and Tsubasa sing very well!! We sang a lot of songs and talked about a lot of things. Haruka and I had to go because we had a part-time job. I wanted to stay with them. After my part-time job, I went to my grandmother's house in Kikuchi. In midnight, I could go there only 30 minutes.
I could enjoy very much with Haruka and Tsubasa. I want to go a lot of places with them!!
(170words)
2009年7月15日水曜日
Liro and Stitch 2
I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.
First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
(360words)
First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. Because they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I am able to enjoy doing a lot of things. I am thankful of my friends. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
(360words)
Liro and Stitch 1
I think that this movie tells us that family and friends are very important for us. I think so too because I feel very lonely if I were alone. I like talking with my friends and family.
First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. B ecause they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I can enjoy doing a lot of things. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
(351words)
First, Liro has no parents but she has an elder sister. Her sister is very kind and takes care of her. I think that if I had no parents, I could not live happily. Liro has no parents but she lives very happily because she has an elder sister. She is the greatest elder sister for Liro. I thought Liro and her elder sister were very good family.
In my family, I have an elder sister too. She married last month and she gave a birth to a boy. Her family looks very happy and enjoying their lives. But I feel a little lonely. Because I am good terms with my elder sister. When we had same free times, we went a lot of places together. Her husband is very kind to me so I like him very much. My sister and her husband are very good couple, I think. I sometimes feel lonely but I can enjoy her family.
Liro has a best friend. He is a monster named Stitch. Liro had no friends till Stitch came. Stitch is a monster but Liro and Stitch are very good friends. B ecause they take care of them each other. It is very great thing, I think.
In my friends, I have a lot of friends in university, part-time job’s place and so on. I like talking and driving with them very much. When I stay with them, I can enjoy doing a lot of things. We help each other too. I think that it is very bad thing to think of myself. If I think of myself, I lost my all friends, I think.
I can enjoy my life and very happy because I have a family and a lot of friends. If I had no family and friends, my life was very boring. I think that family and friends are very important for us.
(351words)
2009年7月10日金曜日
BR 1-11 : The Gingerbread Man
I have read this book written in Japanease a lot of times when I was a childwood. This story is about a little old man, a little old woman, the gingerbread man and a few cildren. The old man and woman lived happily but they had no children. So they cooked a boy out of gingerbread. When she opened the oven, the gingerbread jumped and ran away. The gingerbread man ran away and ran way. But the gingerbread man could not to swim and could not go over the river. The fox helped the gingerbread man. But the fox ate the gingerbread man in the fox.
This story is very suprisingly!! I think that it is bad thing to do what I want to.
(124words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
Portfolio for Writting lll
Student ID: vwxyz
[Please replace "vwxyz" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
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(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 1-01a (2009.04.08) | | | | | | | ||
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| 1-02a (2009.06.01) | | | | | | | | |
| 1-02b (2009.07.06) | | | | | | | | |
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| 1-03a (2009.06.29) | | | | | | | | |
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
| Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | | | | |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | | | | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | | | | |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | | | | |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | | |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | | | | |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | | |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
| Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
Part-time job
I have a part-time job from Monday to Friday. I work at crime school and I teach English grammar, Japanease and classic Japanease to high school students. They study very hard to pass the entrance examination. They are very cute and friendly. It is very difficult for me to teach them but I do my best. Recently, I like to teach and I come to think that I want to be a teacher in the future.
I am very tired after finishing my part-time job, but I am able to enjoy teaching them. I like my part-time job very much!!
(100words)
I am very tired after finishing my part-time job, but I am able to enjoy teaching them. I like my part-time job very much!!
(100words)
My high school days
I went to Kyusyu Gakuinn high school. I like KyuuGaku very much!!
I belonged to English class for 3 years. Our class had a lot of classes on a day. We had about for 10 classes. We studied very hard to pass the entrance examination. To study was very hard for me but I liked Kyusyuu Gakuinn's teachers very much!! They were very kind and friendly.
I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and I played the frute. I like music very much but I gave up belonging the club. Although I gave up the club, I contined to practice the frute in my house. To play the instrument is very interesting for me.
I was able to experience a lot of things. I had a very bitter experiences but I had a lot of very interesting experiences. I think I was happy to go to KyuuGaku very much!!
(151words)
I belonged to English class for 3 years. Our class had a lot of classes on a day. We had about for 10 classes. We studied very hard to pass the entrance examination. To study was very hard for me but I liked Kyusyuu Gakuinn's teachers very much!! They were very kind and friendly.
I belonged to brass band club for 6 months and I played the frute. I like music very much but I gave up belonging the club. Although I gave up the club, I contined to practice the frute in my house. To play the instrument is very interesting for me.
I was able to experience a lot of things. I had a very bitter experiences but I had a lot of very interesting experiences. I think I was happy to go to KyuuGaku very much!!
(151words)
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