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2009年11月11日水曜日

Revise essay 2-02b World history

It is very great I watched two movies from the website. They were about Egypt and The Ice Age. I have leaned a little about Egypt. But I did not know particular about the country. I have also leaned The Ice Age but I did not know detailed about the age. That movie gave me a lot kind of knowledge.

I did not know about Egypt but I was interested in about the country so that I have watched a TV program before about it for a few times for example pyramid, Tutankhamen, Cleopatra and so on. Egypt has a lot of pyramid and they are very mysterious and beautiful, I think. This movie from the website showed me about pyramid. I always think that how the early people built that pyramids. It is very great and wonderful thing!! There were not crane and any other machine!! And Egypt has a very great river. The name of river is Nile. The river is the longest river in the world. I think that Egypt has not only great history but also beautiful river. I also think that that day’s people are very smart.

I did not know about The Ice Age and I was not interested in that age. But this movie showed me a lot of knowledge. I think that the most important thing for that age’s people is fire. It is very important for us but it is more important than now. If it were not for fire, I could not eat food, warm up and so on. Fire protected them from outside enemy especially wild animal. They had not weapon like now. They made a lot of weapon to protect selves. The masterpiece is carving knife and which was made of stone. It has a lot of different kinds. Thanks to them, they were able to cut meet so that they could eat food easily. If I had been born that day, I could not have live for a long time. I think that that day’s people ware very strong and help each other than now. The nature is also beautiful than today, I think. I think that because there were no car, factory, deforestation and so on, it is very hard to live in that day.

I think that I’m happy because there are a lot of convenient things in the world.
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2009年10月21日水曜日

Essays2-01bFavPlace.doc

My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.

I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for us. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.

I like the place where is in my car. I got a drivers license six months ago. So I go to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and Syouta Shimizu. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs make me move very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.

I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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2009年10月17日土曜日

Essay2-01a FavPlace.doc

My favorite place is my room. I can relax very much. I usually listen to music, drinking, talk with my friends and think a lot of thing. I like red color very much so that curtain and table of my room are red!! It is very cute, I think. If I feel painful, I listen to music and drink in my room. My room is next to veranda. So I like veranda too. I often drink and think a lot of things in veranda. It is very important for me.
I like bathroom too. I listen to music and think a lot of things in bathroom. I like tepid water so that I am able to take a bath for a log time. If you feel painful, I suggest that you take a bath for a log time. I think that taking a bath is very good thing for you. After taking a bath, you feel better a little, I think.
I like the place in my car. I got a driver’s license six months ago. So I do to school by my car. In my car, I listen to music every day. Recently, I listen to music which are sang BENI, AZU, mihimaru GT, EXILE and 清水翔太. Do you know them? They are very good singers, I think!! Their songs moved very much. I like to go driving very much!! So I often go driving with my friends with listening to music and talking a lot of things. It is very fun for me. When I feel painful, I sometimes go driving alone with listening to music. It is a little lonely but it is necessary for me because I can think a lot of things in my car.
I have some favorite places but the most favorite place is my room!!!
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2009年6月10日水曜日

Essay 1-01b: Letter to host family

Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith

Hello!!
My name is Tomoko. I'm 19 years old. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. There are 4 people in my family and a dog: father, mother, older sister, me and a dog(TOTO). My father is a policeman and my mother is a housewife. My sister is 23 years old and gave birth to a boy last October.

I like to watch movies and listening to music very much. I especially like "Pirates of Caribean" the best. I've watched it at least 7 times. I like Orlando Bloum very much and I watched all his movies. In music, I like "Britney Spears" very much. She is very cute, her dance is very sexy and she is a very good singer. I have her all CDs. I've heard that she is not liked in your country like Japan. Is it true?
I like music not listening but playing. I'm not a good player but I like playing the piano, violin and flute. I've taken lessons in the piano since I was 3 years old. Though I had stopped studying for the entrance examination, I started again when I became a college student.

It is my first time to visit England. I have wanted to go for a long time. So I'm very excited. I love the senery like England very much. You have a lot of very beautiful scenery. I also like to go shopping. I want to go London, and to buy lots of clothes.

What I want to do the best is study English. When I speak mistaken English, please teach me. I'm looking forward to meeting you.

Sincerely,

                                 Your friend,
Tomoko Chijiwa

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